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IELTS Writing & Speaking - Từ Vựng, Bài Mẫu Chủ Đề: CrimeCrime - một trong những topic hóc búa nhất trong các đề IELTS Writing và Speaking, bạn sẽ cực kỳ dễ "bí" nếu chưa có sự chuẩn bị và tìm hiểu kỹ càng. Là một topic khó, tuy nhiên nếu tích lũy được vốn từ vựng chất lượng, chắc chắn đây sẽ là cơ hội ngàn vàng để bạn thể hiện topic vocabulary và gây ấn tượng cực nhanh với giám khảo. Hôm nay, hãy cùng JOLO tìm hiểu trọn bộ từ mới, collocations và bài mẫu Writing - Speaking về chủ đề Crime nhé! Show Học thêm:
TỪ VỰNG IELTS CHỦ ĐỀ CRIME
COLLOCATIONS CHỦ ĐỀ CRIME
BÀI MẪU IELTS WRITING TASK 2 CHỦ ĐỀ CRIME
⇒ Sample Answer 1: There are several generally accepted beliefs about prison. Firstly, that prison is a social defense against anti-social people. In short, it keeps us safe. Secondly, that prison punishes wrongdoers through their loss of freedom. Thirdly that it teaches convicts the error of their ways, so that when they are released, they can enter back into daily life as law-abiding citizens. However, there is growing evidence that prison is not always the best solution to the problems of crime that we face. Several scientific studies have shown that prison is not nearly as beneficial to society as we might imagine. There are several explanations for this. The terrible conditions in most prisons mean that criminals rarely receive a positive education. Rather, they spend their time inside with other prisoners who teach them the tricks of their trade. Also, when they are released, it is very difficult for them to find a job, so they often feel that they have no choice but to reoffend. It’s the only thing they know. So the truth is that they are more likely to commit crimes again when they are released than if they hadn’t been sent to prison in the first place. As a society, we have to pay attention to the results of these findings. In practice, we may be a lot safer if we give criminals the ability to gain the practical skills they need to get a job and live successful, productive lives, rather than just locking them away. There is little proof that prison works. Perhaps now is the time for us to take important decisions regarding our system of punishment. At the very least we need to give it more thought. It could be a matter of life and death. (291 words, Band 9)
⇒ Sample Answer 2: A large number of criminals who serve their prison sentence, leave prison only to reoffend. This is mainly because of the lack of rehabilitation and difficulty finding regular employment once released. There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to deal with criminals who reoffended. Firstly, the reason for most first-time offenders committing crimes again, once they have been released from prison, is due to lack of rehabilitation whilst in prison. In other words, offenders are not given a chance to retrain and learn new skills for their future or develop a deeper understanding of correct moral behaviour and instead mix with other criminals, which only strengthens their criminal intentions. Secondly, repeat offending is also owing to the difficulty in finding employment after being released. As a result, many of them struggle financially which leads them back to crime, regardless of the consequences. There are two effective solutions to the problem of repeat offenders. One way to tackle this is to ensure that all criminals entering prison are given the chance to retrain with useful skills which will hopefully ensure them a job after they have served their sentence. By doing this, it will help them reintegrate back into society and give them some means of supporting themselves financially. Another method of dealing with criminals who reoffend is to have more supervision and checks in place when they are back in society. This solution would hopefully prevent them from taking any chances and deter them from reoffending because they are being so closely watched. In conclusion, having training in prison and also close observation when first time offenders are released are effective in dealing with the issue. If governments implemented these solutions, crime figures would soon drop. (289 words, Band 8.0+) ĐỀ THAM KHẢO IELTS WRITING TASK 2 CHỦ ĐỀ CRIME
To what extent do you agree?
Do you agree or disagree?
What possible solutions can you suggest?
Do you agree that this is the main cause of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment? ------ Tìm hiểu thêm các khóa học tại JOLO English - Hệ thống trung tâm dạy Tiếng Anh uy tín nhất tại Hà Nội và HCM : |
